The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the number of visitor in 4 museum in London over the period of 5 months, starting from May.
Overall, British Museum showed place where most people went to all over the period and was the only has an upward trend while National Museum always at least.
As illustrated, In June, British Museum having over 400.000 guests which more twofold than National Museum then this number still remained in the next month. However, in August, both museum reach a high of over 700.000 and exceeding 300.000, correspondingly. After witnessed remarkable increasingly then decline gradually untill the end of the surveyed period, reach to accounted 450.000 and under 200.000, respectively. Moreover, with the comparison, it is clearly that British Museum more than twofold to threefold than National Museum.
On the other hand, History Museum and Science Museum, initially, more than 400.000 visitors. In July, History Museum had mildly decrease then significant rose to exactly 600.000 in August while the other sightly growth then stabilize. In September, the opposite was true that History Museum fallen to under 400.000 guests while Science Museum saw the reverse touched at 500.000 visitors. Despite the Science Museum witnessed an increase, nevertheless, at the end of period both place failed down with approximately 250.000 and precisely 300.000 in History Museum and Science Museum, respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'museum' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'museums'.
Suggestion: museums
...s illustrate the number of visitor in 4 museum in London over the period of 5 months, ...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...ors. In July, History Museum had mildly decrease then significant rose to exactly 600.00...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, while, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47272727273 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65234575735 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 1.44329896907 624% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.8391534605 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137937535889 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711677808214 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514622237708 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115659633336 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465102659984 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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