The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

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The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013.

Given are the two charts depicting the middling house prices in england and its Capital-london, and to show the comparison regarding the medium house prices in other areas of england.

east-asian: normal; white-space: pre-wrap;">Looking at the two bar charts, it is immediately obvious that the prices paid for houses in london is higher than england and london also take the lead with the highest average house prices compared with other areas of england.

east-asian: normal; white-space: pre-wrap;">Perceptibly, In 1995, the cost in order to buy a house in england was approximately 160000 euro and touched at 200000 euro in 2013. Next comes london with 200000 euro after which rose dramatically with 410000 euro.

east-asian: normal; white-space: pre-wrap;">Turning to the average house prices in other areas of england. it can be noticed that london was the highest with 400000 euro, followed by. south east and south west with 310000 euro and 260000 euro, respectively. Likes wide, north west and Midlands was regarded with 200000 euro and 120000 euro. lies last to the north east is the smallest with 100000 euro.

east-asian: normal; white-space: pre-wrap;">was regarded with 200000 euro and 120000 euro. lies last to the north east is the smallest with 100000 euro.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Suggestion: East-asian
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Suggestion: East-asian
...ompared with other areas of england. east-asian: normal; white-space: pre-wrap;'&g...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...use in england was approximately 160000 euro and touched at 200000 euro in 2013. Nex...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...ately 160000 euro and touched at 200000 euro in 2013. Next comes london with 200000 ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... in 2013. Next comes london with 200000 euro after which rose dramatically with 4100...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...ter which rose dramatically with 410000 euro. east-asian: normal; white-space: pr...
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Suggestion: East-asian
... rose dramatically with 410000 euro. east-asian: normal; white-space: pre-wrap;'&g...
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Suggestion: It
...house prices in other areas of england. it can be noticed that london was the high...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...that london was the highest with 400000 euro, followed by. south east and south west...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
.... south east and south west with 310000 euro and 260000 euro, respectively. Likes wi...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... south west with 310000 euro and 260000 euro, respectively. Likes wide, north west a...
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Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...t and Midlands was regarded with 200000 euro and 120000 euro. lies last to the north...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...as regarded with 200000 euro and 120000 euro. lies last to the north east is the sma...
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Suggestion: Lies
...arded with 200000 euro and 120000 euro. lies last to the north east is the smallest ...
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Line 7, column 406, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... north east is the smallest with 100000 euro. east-asian: normal; white-space: pr...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: East-asian
...st is the smallest with 100000 euro. east-asian: normal; white-space: pre-wrap;'&g...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...wrap;'>was regarded with 200000 euro and 120000 euro. lies last to the north...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...as regarded with 200000 euro and 120000 euro. lies last to the north east is the sma...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lies
...arded with 200000 euro and 120000 euro. lies last to the north east is the smallest ...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... north east is the smallest with 100000 euro.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51485148515 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85868145947 2.54303337028 152% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465346534653 0.622605031667 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.158294221 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226962065656 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105233814902 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142569294534 0.0603063233224 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186620225857 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157713498611 0.0580467560999 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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