As countries get more developed and their technologies get improved, the health care part of the countries will improve too. in that case death rate is estimated to decrease by their advanced knowledge of finding new cures for illnesses and their modern technologies put in inventing new Instrument for those who in need. On other hand low rate of child birth due to lack of interest in having children or lack of time needed to put to raise a family is going to cause countries to age.
In this situation, huge amount of countries budget is going to spent on health care of elders that it will not consist of any benefit for economy of the country instead of investing that money on industries and productive activities with extensive benefits.decreasing in working age population in a country is as same as loosing its assets، whereas it is working age population that have financial profits for society.investing more money and budget on elderlies without no profit on one hand, loosing resources by lack of working age population on another hand is predicted to cripple the economy.by decreasing in young group population there will be fewer potential young couple so this lead to fewer children.
In my opinion the government should apply strategies to prevent this cycle. For instance, there should be policies to encourage young people with higher maternity rate to make family and after that there should be a system for supporting them in their journey.polices like maternity leave with payment for both parents, providing support services to new mothers and fathers, enhance education system and lower its expenses.
In such a environment, society will be persuade to have children and birth rate will be rise eventually.
After all it is the government job to seek solutions to cover the negative effects of aging their contries.
- The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over What effects will these predictions have on 91
- You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter-Give your reasons for wanting the job-Explain why you think you can do the job-Desc 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
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Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...system and lower its expenses. In such a environment, society will be persuade t...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and birth rate will be rise eventually. After all it is the government job to seek so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, after all, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 26.3917525773 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 937.175257732 165% => OK
No of words: 306.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04575163399 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89352834805 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 290.88556701 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.606957544 44.8134815571 445% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.0 76.5299724578 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.25 16.8248392259 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212721819402 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893242260249 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069315482922 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114544868983 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668237355366 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 8.37731958763 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 7.45979381443 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 8.15463917526 270% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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