The charts below show the world traffic volume measure in passenger kilometre miles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the world traffic volume measure in passenger-kilometre-miles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give an overview about the global changes in quantity of vehicles based on the means of transport people use in 30-yearly-intervals starting from 1990 with future predictions to 2030.

Overall, the traffic volume will increase twofold in each 30-year period and will reach 103 trillion pkm in 2030. Additionally, automobiles will be replaced by high-speed transport as the most popular transport. Railways is predicted standing as the last choice of people when they need to move.

The high-speed transport will reach its peak of 41 percent of traffic volume in 2030. Starting from 9% in 1990, it accounts almost one third in total means of transport in over the world in 2020 and at last standing at the first rank with 41%. In contrast, the other vehicles face the drop off. From the most favorite means of transport among people around the world, automobile dramatically falls down by 10% of market share in the next measured year and continues decreasing to 35% at the end of the period. Railways and buses are not better. The former represents over a quarter of total traffic volume in 1990 but it can’t remain the interest of people in using railway and lose 9% of total users during 60 years. The latter plunges by 5% from 1990 to 2030, which almost go down 50% and still be the less considerable vehicle.

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2018-07-01 Hieu Le 91 view

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, still, third, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83043478261 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65932393302 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4639869136 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0670520426789 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245876194131 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256378352938 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422105546512 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191918915167 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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