Dear John,
Great to hear that you are coming for a visit. I'm looking forward to showing around you.
How long are you planning to stay? Also, is there anything, in particular, you want to do while you're in here? By the way, if you haven't booked a place to stay yet, you're welcome to crash on my sofa.
You should definitely set some time aside to explore the city center. Of course, you can visit some of the main sights like Birla Mandir, Golconda Fort, IMAX multiplex and so on but, it's also fun to wander around streets and alleys and just explore. There are a plethora of interesting shops and cafes dotted around.
Have you tried Hyderabadi Biryani before? if not, you're really in for a treat! The biryani here is delicious and amazing. It's also worth to try classical dishes like prawn fry with bendi sauce -- its a kind of sauce with vegetables in it. You can also get tasty wine here and generally pretty affordable.
Let me know your plans and hope to see you soon.
Weber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o hear that you are coming for a visit. Im looking forward to showing around you. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ng, in particular, you want to do while youre in here? By the way, if you havent book...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...while youre in here? By the way, if you havent booked a place to stay yet, youre welco...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... you havent booked a place to stay yet, youre welcome to crash on my sofa. You sh...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e city center. Of course, you can visit some of the main sights like Birla Mandir, Golconda...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ve you tried Hyderabadi Biryani before? if not, youre really in for a treat! The b...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ried Hyderabadi Biryani before? if not, youre really in for a treat! The biryani here...
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Line 9, column 197, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...shes like prawn fry with bendi sauce -- its a kind of sauce with vegetables in it. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while, in particular, kind of, of course, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52486187845 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16152058407 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690607734807 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0352462859 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248600504829 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934522847649 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666518767334 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15035752734 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544932764991 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.