Dear Sir / Madam,
I am a resident of LBN Colony and staying here for 20 years which is under the jurisdiction of your council. I am writing this letter to thank for providing a new park in this area. Park is maintained at a good level of neatness and people in the colony are finding at the peace.
However, there are some problems that need to be addressed at the earliest. I suggest them as the park is missing some basic amenities. It does not have a particular pavement to walk instead people are walking on the green grass which demolishes the beauty of the park. It is also missing the gender-specific restrooms, I meant to say that only one restroom is provided in the part which is where awkwardness is being increased. I also suggest increasing the dustbins to put the trash.
I feel my suggestions would be more enough to improve the park peacefulness and hence by increase the decency of the colony.
Furthermore, I expect you favorable my suggestions and prioritize them and would take an immediate action so as to save the park and its environment from being bullied by the some of the careless people.
Hoping to hear from you,
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 107, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...them and would take an immediate action so as to save the park and its environment from ...
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Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...s environment from being bullied by the some of the careless people. Hoping to he...
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Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s environment from being bullied by the some of the careless people. Hoping to hear from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, as to, i feel, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76652687181 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610576923077 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3383175075 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7272727273 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312719497044 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104596835584 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691455503894 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149448607806 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227297612017 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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