Coffee

Essay topics:

Coffee

The provided pie charts demonstrate the allocations of nations worldwide that consumed, producted coffee and their profit distribution in 2014.
Overall, it is noticeable that Europe was the most significant consumer, South Africa created most products while delivery service obtained the highest share of profit.
As can be observed from the chart, Europe ingested over fivefold drinks than Japan, with 41% and 8% subsequently. In addition, American citizens showed interest at 39%, followed by that of the rest countries in the world with only 8%.
Then, most java was manufactured in South Africa with 44%, as compared to the second highest percentage from Indonesia being accurately half of South African production. Moreover, Vietnam produced the least prevalent coffee together with Japanese outputs accounted for 2% higher.
Eventually, the deliveries took up the majority of profit with 51%, which was over fivefold better than the proportion from exporters being 10%. Furthermore, a quarter of the entire distribution belonged to producers, whereas retailers earned more money than ones occupying 24% in summary

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hereas retailers earned more money than ones occupying 24% in summary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62941176471 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79879484692 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711764705882 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.6040360813 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.625 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 4.34317383033 256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09819162686 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493497403079 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085497324328 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619564766892 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797330345049 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 8.71597938144 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 7.59969072165 139% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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