A company is organising a trip abroad for language training to a number of limited places. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should:
• express That you want to join
• say why you think you should join
• explain why the organisers should select you
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement in newspaper for a language course in abroad and there are limited number of seats. I really want to join this training as it is essential for me.
In future, I have planned to go to abroad for further studies and by joining the training, that your organisation is providing, will help me to learn foreign language. That is why, It would be beneficial to me and do not have to face any issue during my studies or while conversing to any person of foreign land.
Though, training is little bit expensive but I can manage to bear the expenses of the course. Beside that, I have a few knowledge of french, so I am capable of learning this language easily and in given short span. I would like that you should enrol my name for this training as I am the right person with appropriate ability and money to complete this course.
I am looking forward to your response.
Yours Sincerely
Paul Thompson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...training as it is essential for me. In future, I have planned to go to abroad for fur...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...of foreign land. Though, training is little bit expensive but I can manage to bear the ...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...es of the course. Beside that, I have a few knowledge of french, so I am capable of...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little knowledge'.
Suggestion: little knowledge
...es of the course. Beside that, I have a few knowledge of french, so I am capable of learning ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56818181818 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56664777192 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0927567512 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21777424199 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801102043635 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637246979382 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115213004384 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795082471461 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.