Mother nature have blessed us with abundant natural resources. Although we are grateful, we are not aware of the importance of protecting the nature for our future generations. However the changes are inevitable, we have to work together to balance the ecology of our world. Is the technology responsible for all the damages caused? This essay agrees the fact that the humans in their hurry to achieve and satisfy their insatiable thirst is causing deleterious damage to the planet.
The first aspect to point out in this context is the Industrialization and Globalization. The tremendous achievements in the field of Science and Technology gave the opportunity to develop different types of chemicals which depletes soil and causes water pollution, noise pollution and air pollution. The hazardous gas emission from industries causes depletion of Ozone layer which is our planet's protective layer. The proper reuse and disposal of waste from these industries can reduce the pollution to a greater extent.
Moreover,humans are invading the lands of farming and changing them to residential areas. Deforestation is an another issue which results in climatic changes and global warming. Even though we have enough rivers,they are in a stage of death. Around 14 percentage of our land are rainforests, but they are becoming less in number. Most of our wild species are in a stage of extinct. In one way or the other humans are responsible for all these damages to the Earth. Proper law making and proper awareness programs needed to alarm the humans about the current situation
After analyzing the above matter, it can be concluded that humans who are solely dependent on Earth have to recognize the current scenario and take effective measures to stop the exploitation. To ensure a better life for our successors, we have to use the non renewable and renewable resources very carefully. Morever, it is sensible enough to understand that the Earth is not humancentric and one day the natural powers will come down on us with a heavy hand and we will be their helpless victims.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... the nature for our future generations. However the changes are inevitable, we have to ...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his context is the Industrialization and Globalization. The tremendous achievemen...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ion, noise pollution and air pollution. The hazardous gas emission from industries ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which is our planets protective layer. The proper reuse and disposal of waste from...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , humans
...llution to a greater extent. Moreover,humans are invading the lands of farming and c...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an issue' or 'another issue'.
Suggestion: an issue; another issue
... to residential areas. Deforestation is an another issue which results in climatic changes and g...
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Suggestion: , they
...rming. Even though we have enough rivers,they are in a stage of death. Around 14 perc...
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
... are rainforests, but they are becoming less in number. Most of our wild species are in a stag...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...dependent on Earth have to recognize the current scenario and take effective meas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 937.175257732 186% => OK
No of words: 341.0 206.0 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12023460411 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89461384507 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 127.690721649 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 290.88556701 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9573064519 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05555555556 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0314819500951 0.216113520407 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0119846066447 0.0766984524023 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230008870613 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0149357744362 0.12726935374 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182936530619 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 41.2886597938 252% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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