•Describe the meter reading you saw on your bill and why you feel you were overcharged
•Explain why this information is wrong.
•Say what you would you like the utilities board to do.
Dear Sir,
I am one of your best regular customer and I writing this letter to show my disappointment regarding my Gas bill amount which has been overcharged.
I have received bill online and checked the details and totally I have messed up with this. The amount of bill is showing INR 1500 and total units are indicating 600. I can assure you that this not at all possible because I have noted last month units which given by you and I have calculated now current month units, It''s pointing out that only 445 units only which I have used for last quarter. Even though, I have checked with my neighbours and my land lord, they were saying that delivery executive came on 04th September and has taken unit values but unfortunately that day I have been gone for a business trip and came on 05th September in order to this there is no possibilities made units as well because I have locked my out side grill gate and meter box with in the gate.
I therefore, request you to reconsider the bill and retake the proper bill and please send me the revised gas bill so that I can pay the actual amount.
Yours Sincerely,
DACH
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-09-24 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...m one of your best regular customer and I writing this letter to show my disappoi...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have messed up with this. The amount of bill is showing INR 1500 and total units...
^^
Line 5, column 661, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no possibilities'?
Suggestion: there are no possibilities
...came on 05th September in order to this there is no possibilities made units as well because I have locke...
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Line 5, column 731, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... units as well because I have locked my out side grill gate and meter box with in the ga...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46376811594 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40029053762 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.77611177 44.8134815571 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.0 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147788661214 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067634258513 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467680143418 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101267202133 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416028354904 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.