Does modern technology make life more convenient or was life better when technology was simple?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'industry'?
Suggestion: industry
...tter life. Technology makes a different industries as well as life.
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a different industries as well as life.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 26.3917525773 8% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 200.0 937.175257732 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 42.0 206.0 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.54572989502 3.78020617076 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71512100765 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 32.0 127.690721649 25% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.761904761905 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 67.5 290.88556701 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.1334630345 44.8134815571 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6666666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.638134209129 0.216113520407 295% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.416892387725 0.0766984524023 544% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.293688996378 0.0603063233224 487% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.638134209129 0.12726935374 501% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 9.0 41.2886597938 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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