During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman, In your letter:
1. remind him when ans where you met
2. tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you will be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Sharma,
My name is Vipul, and I hope you remember me. It was 20th April when we both boarded the same flight from Pune to Bangalore and has good job trends in India. During the conversation, you also suggested me to connect with you with respect to any suitable job opportunities at your restaurants.
I believe I will be a suitable candidate for a position of a restaurant manager as I have done my hotel management from one of the premiere institutes of India. in addition, i have an experience of 3 years in a similar role with AP chains of restaurants. Hence, kindly let me know if there is any suitable vacancy which I can fill in.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Vipul Shrivastava
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman, In your letter:1 64
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman, In your letter:1 64
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman, In your letter:1 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ne of the premiere institutes of India. in addition, i have an experience of 3 yea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 609.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64885496183 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83462158688 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717557251908 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6255630593 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.125 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158432529523 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662283094312 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656799273515 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110109401449 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614522045693 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.