During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a business man who owns a chain of restaurants.and said you should contact him a possible job in of his restaurants.
Dear Mr. Davidson,
I am writing to remind you about our last discussion the last time we met. I was on the same flight with you on the 22nd of March, 2019, en route Dubai. We got to talk about a lot of things because you sat next to me on the flight and you introduced yourself to me as a business mogul that owns chain of restaurants.
Nevertheless, you promised to offer me a Job in one of your restaurants. I am writing to remind you about the job offer. I would like to work in the kitchen area because I am a certified chef.
Let me tell you more about my job experience, I am a qualified cook and can prepare most well sought-after foods. I have 10 years working experience and I have worked in many well-known five stars Hotels, and I am sure my wealth of knowledge will be an added advantage to your business.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2019'.
Suggestion: March 2019
...the same flight with you on the 22nd of March, 2019, en route Dubai. We got to talk about a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, well, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28823529412 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59625095689 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8561385822 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211074649925 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873321890279 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854057240471 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13061377521 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687442781279 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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