Dear Mr. Ivanov,
My name is Evgeny Ivashko and I am writing to you in regard to the job you have suggested to me recently.
Let me start by reminding the details of this case. We both booked the same flight (SU0576), Moscow-St. Petersburg on 10 June 2018 and it appeared that we sat next to each other, seats 35 and 36. We have a pretty interesting conversation about your business and then when we were during the descending near the Pulkovo airport you suggested me a work in your major restaurant, The Sad.
I would be like to remind you that as a Bachelor in Law I am interested in work in this field. According to the HeadHunter website, www.headhunter.ru, you need a specialist with such degree who can either work with legal documents and customers when they are not satisfied.
I suppose that this position suits me right because this is exactly where I have the appropriate experience. As a legal advisor, I've worked in another restaurant in Moscow, The Ritz Carlton, for five years. Also, my wife, Helen, is working in The Sad restaurant as a senior cooker. It would be great to work together.
Having said that, I would be immensely grateful if you ask me to join your team. I greatly appreciate your time and consideration. Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me via mobile phone (89261233434) or via email (evgenyivashko@yandex.ru); please do not no call me after 21:00 pm because I have small children. I look forward to hearing from you at the soonest opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Evgeny Ivashko.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...opriate experience. As a legal advisor, Ive worked in another restaurant in Moscow,...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g from you at the soonest opportunity. Yours sincerely, Evgeny Ivashko.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, i suppose, mind you, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77407407407 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03029060978 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9454045 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9333333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183597085667 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583940396881 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461538741768 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107960224703 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500513256428 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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