Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to you upon our conversation during my last trip. I was travelling with you as a co-passenger in the same flight to London on thanks giving day, hope your remember me. I sill remember the great conversation between us in that sort span of time and your suggestion to drop my resume for a job.
I am here to inform you that I am currently looking for an opportunities in London probably in Hotel industry because my prior experiences are all in the the same industry. I was going through some job portal and stopped at a opening in the restaurant chain that you own. It would be a pleasure for me to work at your restaurant.
I saw the details of your restaurant and the services you provide to customers. I am working as a customer relationship manager for last few years in a hotel, and I believe that I can do justice to improve the services in the restaurant and build a better customer experience.
Thank you for your consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Chiranjit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...anks giving day, hope your remember me. I sill remember the great conversation be...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...estion to drop my resume for a job. I am here to inform you that I am current...
^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: an opportunity; opportunities
...orm you that I am currently looking for an opportunities in London probably in Hotel industry be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...because my prior experiences are all in the the same industry. I was going through some...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...because my prior experiences are all in the the same industry. I was going through some...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ences are all in the the same industry. I was going through some job portal and s...
^
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... through some job portal and stopped at a opening in the restaurant chain that yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58288770053 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85339095032 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9745245283 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179094562873 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746649360853 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553009719824 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116550243798 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379190047997 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.