During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurant.
In letter,
-Remind him when and where you met
-tell him what kind of job you are interested in
-say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Smith,
I felt delighted to have you as my journey-mate on August 24th from Paris to London by Emirates. As the plane cruised, we talked about issues not limited to current affairs. However, as I have remarkable experience in Asian cooking, you asked me if I am interested to join your restaurant-chain. I am writing to you because I found that working with you will not only give me tremendous pleasure, but also enrich my experience.
As you already know that I completed my graduation to be a professional chef, I am interested to contribute to your organization as a cook. Moreover, I can offer my expertise in Asian food menuse which might create a new group of customers for your restaurant. My two-year experience demands more knowledge to proceed in my career, so I do not mind working under an expert chef.
At present, Asian foods are becoming popular in cities of England, so many restaurants are introducing similar menues in their food offerings. As your organization is looking for the opportunity to penetrate the market, my technical expertise in Asian menus can provide good advantage to enable your eateries attract as well as develop new customer group.
I look forward to hearing positve response from you soon.
Kind regards,
Tasnim Fahmi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03255813953 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98901540447 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655813953488 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.205255327 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133490336147 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555902031311 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503729280616 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879056810696 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741360081416 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.