You are planning a two-week vacation, and you need someone to take care o f your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor.1 In your letter
• tell your neighbor that you are going away
• ask your neighbor to take care of your house for you
• explain what tasks you would like your neighbor to do
Dear Jason,
I feel sorry as I couldn't let you know that I would be going to India on a fortnight vacation as this event was organized all on a sudden and I had no option but to prepare myself within short time. As I would be gone for a very long time, I had to depend on someone responsible for maintainance of my house.
we neighbours always talk about your helpful activities which make our life easier. However, as I was in a fix how to manage my house for this time being, the first person that came in my mind was you. it would be great if you please take care of my house on my behalf.
The first task to be taken care of is cleaning the lawn. Don't worry, I already appointed a person to clean it up on next friday, all you need to do is to supervise the operation and pay for the task. I already bargained the cost and its $40. Another thing is turning on the night light and turning off in the morning as the sensor is not working and requires replacement. Oh I forgot to send the laundry, would you please send that immediately?
Once I come back, we will gossip on my current tour with a cup of tea.
take care,
Tasnim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
Dear Jason, I feel sorry as I couldnt let you know that I would be going to I...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ible for maintainance of my house. we neighbours always talk about your helpf...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'neighbour'
Suggestion: neighbour
...e for maintainance of my house. we neighbours always talk about your helpful activiti...
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Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...st person that came in my mind was you. it would be great if you please take care ...
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Line 13, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... be taken care of is cleaning the lawn. Dont worry, I already appointed a person to ...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...my current tour with a cup of tea. take care, Tasnim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, another thing, i feel, in short, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18385650224 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30199075912 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7606037089 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194671828369 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066083379488 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536472625876 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886817966477 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733261134336 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.