EditEssay topics: You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved2) describe your new house3) Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Thomas,
I am writing to you know that at last we have moved to minimalist ranch house in seaside town. We just couldn’t go on living in metropolis. Our daughter left from our home to study in Ankara and my husband was retired on this January. Thus, we decided to look ranch house in seaside town and finally here we are in our new home.
I’m sure you’ll like it. There is only one bedroom, bathroom and kitchen. Although we have small home rather than previous one, we have huge farm on the house in order to cultivate many vegetables, fruits and feed animals. We have already 3 cows and 5 chicken and we cultivate tomato, cucumber, eggplant, potato. We can easily live with a smell budget.
Why don’t you come round this weekend and see what you think of our new place? We would all love to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue in the garden.
Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you.
Lots of love,
Julia.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have moved to minimalist ranch house in seaside town. We just couldn't go o...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, thus, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37368421053 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30091514974 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5284378122 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9230769231 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138380322127 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500488621263 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526511088275 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09518094596 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442058769397 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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