You cannot go to company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR Superviser to:
Explain the reason why you decline the offer
Express you gratitude
Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir,
I was honored to get an offer from your last week. There was an enough time to look at the articles of the job contract. Unfortunately, I state that I cannot accept this offer because of some reasons. First reason is about annual leave. Although I have already had 24 days' annual leave, you offer only 15 days' for going on leave. Secondly, the amount of the salary written in proposal is the same amount of which I am receiving. Thirdly, when I am analyzing the definition and the responsibilities of job, I can understand that they are in the same line with the responsibilities of my current job, in other words, I am sure to say that these job cannot include wider context with extra responsibilities. By the way, I really like my current job as well as having the reasons for not accepting this offer. I am heading the product development project team. In addition, I am selected to the future leaders of my bank.
Your company is the pioneer presenting more products to customers by integrating technological development in banking sector. Everyone who works in this sector wants to get an offer from you. Thus, I cannot deny I was extremely grateful to hear your proposal however I would like to forward to the nonacceptance of this offer.
Best Regards.
Başak
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, in addition, as well as, by the way, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69911504425 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88855034218 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3432782047 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6923076923 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 4.34317383033 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209566696593 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597309370135 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550786426297 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172352950682 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00562551361025 0.0580467560999 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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