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It is thought that smoking and tobacco are responsible for numerous deaths and health hassles across the world. Many individuals believe that these products should be banned. I agree with this viewpoint. This essay will elaborate all the reasons behind my claim.
First and Foremost reason for banning the tobacco is that it is leading cause of numerous deaths occurring throughout the world. The world health organization has recently revealed that 50% people lost their lives due to the consumption of smoking only. It casts an adverse affect on the respiratory system of human beings and lead to deadly diseases cancer. Moreover, not only it affects the person physically, but it also declines the mental power by 10%. The countries where the smoking is illegal has lower death rate as compared to countries where it is legalised
The second vivid reason is that it is the responsibility of the government to protect the people from taking such detrimental substances because many people do not know their ill effects. They just consume it as a entertainment. As per the latest Report 70% of smokers do not know how many fatal diseases take birth due to smoking such as cancer and asthma. Furthermore, long terms consumption of smoking also reduces the productivity of individuals. If the productivity of people comes to halt, then the economy of the country will also be affected. As there is one famous proverb” Health body makes the health Nation”
In conclusion, there are plethora of reasons behind imposing a ban on tobacco sale ranging from impacting the individual mentally and physically to brining the economy of the country to standstill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 937.175257732 148% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75698398615 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4384463233 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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