An English speaking friend is coming to spend a week in your hometown. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
. offer to find a place to stay
. give suggestions abut what to do in a week.
. inform about the clothes to be brought.
Dear Sarah
Hope that this letter of mine finds you in a good health. I'm very excited as you are visiting to my hometown during your holidays as it's been a long time since we last met. I've made all the plans for a week when you're staying with me and penning all those in this epistle.
You do not need to worry about your stay. I will find a hotel for you as there are many accommodations available nearby to my place at reasonable costs. On the day, when you'll reach Shimla, we'll go to the Ridge in the evening as it's a nice place to admire the beauty of the nature. Next day, Indian Institute of Science and Technology would be a best place to place as it'll whole day.
On the third day of your stay, we'll enjoy the traditional food of Shimla at Mall Road. Then for two days, we'll go to Kufri which is a tourist place around 20kms from Shimla. I am not going to hear any excuse as you're going to stay with my family at my house for the rest two days. And listen, at the time of your visit, weather would be cold so don't forget to bring warm clothes.
Waiting to see you. Give my best to everyone in your family.
See you soon
Malisa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ter of mine finds you in a good health. Im very excited as you are visiting to my ...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...its been a long time since we last met. Ive made all the plans for a week when your...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... Ive made all the plans for a week when youre staying with me and penning all those i...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...e at reasonable costs. On the day, when youll reach Shimla, well go to the Ridge in t...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... well go to the Ridge in the evening as its a nice place to admire the beauty of th...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...tute of Science and Technology would be a best place to place as itll whole day. ...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...a. I am not going to hear any excuse as youre going to stay with my family at my hous...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...of your visit, weather would be cold so dont forget to bring warm clothes. Waitin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13777777778 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00320730484 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6410161514 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216028587535 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763651087328 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596739657348 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135923667281 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218179693616 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.