Dear John,
I am writing to tell you that I am feeling happy that you would like to visit in Mumbai city for two weeks and spend a holiday in west part of India.
As I know that, you are coming in Mumbai first time and I believe that it would difficult to find out 5 star incredible hotel and location in my region, so If you still not booked Hotel then I would book for you in advance, Please kindly share arrival and departure date to me through E-mail. As you aware, that Mumbai is a magnificent city and it is called Bollywood city. I would suggest you to visit must few famous places such as film studio, siddhi vinayak temple, Marina Beach and must visit Juhu Beach at night. I will try to take leave in my firm and if possible I will join also with you.
Nowadays, The season is changed from summer to winter so I would appreciate if you bring jacket with you to prevent body from cold wind and bring your normal clothes.
Last but not least, once you arrive I will introduce with my family and will take dinner in my home.See you soon.
Best wishes,
Samit Bhavsar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: See
... family and will take dinner in my home.See you soon. Best wishes, Samit Bhavsa...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32195121951 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07116689386 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8839727512 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.048147324206 0.216113520407 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195102251108 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278010969872 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366465162826 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304767415021 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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