Essay topics: Write a letter to restaurant manager. In your letter,
• Explain that you would like to apply for the job
• Give some details of any relevant experience that you have
• Specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest for the opening opportunity of part-time job as an accountant at your restaurant.
My name is Assad , and I am interested to enhance my experience to work with your team in finance department. I can start as a cashier then move to other positions based on the work-load.
I have been working over four years in similar positions at other restaurant outside the city. I moved recently to the town to complete my post-graduates studies, therefore I would like to join your team as a part-time to be able to fund my stay and rent till getting the final degree certificate.
As you may know that during the day time I will be quite busy with attending the lectures. Therefore, I would suggest that if I can only join the night shift with your finance team on the weekdays and morning shift on Friday.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Assad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... at your restaurant. My name is Assad , and I am interested to enhance my exper...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s at other restaurant outside the city. I moved recently to the town to complete ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...etting the final degree certificate. As you may know that during the day time I...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ures. Therefore, I would suggest that if I can only join the night shift with you...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69512195122 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73168666384 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4870234161 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181947680229 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708134846593 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393546625936 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990132924236 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035601484024 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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