Essay topics: You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1) Explain your situation
2) Say why you feel unsure about living in the city
3) Ask some question about life in the city
Hi Lisa,
I hope everything is OK overthere. I’m writing this letter to inform you that I will move to sydney next month.
I guess you will find it surprising right ?. I have been offered a job that require me to work at sydney until our project is finished. I am not sure if I can accomodate with a new life in sydney or not. you know that I am living with my family and now I have to live far away from them, it is so sad. Maybe the food in there is not as my taste and some culure differences can make me confused. I never visit to sydney so it will be difficult to find a way to go to school.
you lived there for a long time so can you introduce me some thing about sydney ?. I want to know about the peple lifestyle, the trafic, the food,...etc. I hope you see you next month.
Regards
Alice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Lisa, I hope everything is OK overthere. I&apo...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t sydney until our project is finished. I am not sure if I can accomodate with a ...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...odate with a new life in sydney or not. you know that I am living with my family an...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...icult to find a way to go to school. you lived there for a long time so can you ...
^^^
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...for a long time so can you introduce me some thing about sydney ?. I want to know about th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...he peple lifestyle, the trafic, the food,...etc. I hope you see you next month. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, i guess, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04347826087 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28146633487 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2256483234 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1818181818 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298265485861 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102634551406 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09519310261 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206345740974 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503911353046 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.56 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.