Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a 34-year-old Iranian male who is studying for his master’s degree at the University of Melbourne. I am writing to announce to you my greatest enthusiastic about your job offer and to give you some information about myself concerning this job.
Actually, as an overseas student, I am in desperate need of acquiring knowledge about Australian culture in the account of enhancing my understanding around this very issue by means of cultural interchange. Thus, your job offer has created a great opportunity for me to nail this aim.
Whereas I am very good with little kids, although I do not have a baby, I had a chance to gain experience for helping my sister to bring up her little one for roughly six months. Accordingly, I have not only baby passionate but also experience for managing what you might expect me.
As I mentioned, I am a master student, therefore, I have ample time for my pastime which I rather spend it playing with your kid and if you let me take him/her to amusement park or playground to make a good memory for your baby and by some precious time for you to spend for yourself. Because I am totally aware of that a little free time would be as of a premium for you.
I would be appreciated if you consider inviting me over for an interview to know each other better, and I would be more than grateful if you let me be along with you during this six-month journey.
Should you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
SAEED NAJD ATAEI
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development 79
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is to increase the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. 56
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 89
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for examples working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, if, look, so, therefore, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57785467128 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79278841833 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8102766065 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255835750194 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092462402045 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453904201533 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132615721504 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383680678277 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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