Example Task 1
You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter,
Complain about the situation
Say why this is a problem
And propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter with regard to noise, coming daily from the canteen, which is newly opened. Although I am pleased that we have this facility, the restaurant remains open up to mid night and therefore, there is a considerable amount of talking, shouting continuing up to 12.30 pm every night.
It causes us substantial disturbance because, at that time, we either try to sleep or else studying. As a result, neither we are able to focus on study or neither can sleep well. It makes us tired in the morning and interferes with our education progress too. In both ways, it is affecting us negatively.
I, therefore, want to suggest limiting the canteen’s timing 10 pm at the latest on weekend, leaving it open up to midnight on weekend. Also, I propose that we can put some signs reminding users to be considerate and keep the noise to an absolute minimum. These are straight forward ways, but highly valuable.
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Kind Regards,
Manish
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| 2021-07-01 | SKN | 73 | view |
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| 2021-01-28 | Manish Rooprai | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter with regard to ...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest limiting'.
Suggestion: suggest limiting
...us negatively. I, therefore, want to suggest to limit the canteen’s timing 10 pm at the lates...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his matter. Kind Regards, Manish
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, well, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82584269663 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69773502608 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713483146067 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0014875812 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152275133865 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450350876617 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044526595777 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885324557177 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483195929621 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.