A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Hello Rahul,
I am extremely excited to hear about your visit to my place and have been making many plans since the day i heard this news. It's been a long time since we last met. While i was making a plan to pick you up from the railway station tomorrow, some urgent work at the office came up. If i had an option, i would have cancelled it. But sadly, this is a kind of a situation, which can not be avoided or postponed.
You don't have to be worried though. All you need to do is to take a cab from the station, which i have already scheduled for you, and it will be waiting for you at the station at 3 PM sharp, which is about 15 minutes prior to your arrival time. Also, i left a duplicate key with my neighbour, which you can collect from him once you reach and take some rest after having lunch, which would be kept ready for you in the fridge. You just need to take it out, make it warm in the microwave and have it at your convenience.
I would be at home not later than 7 PM and have made great plans for the evening. We will be going to a musical show at the local club, where you would enjoy the performance of a notorious street band, i hope.
See you soon.
Best regards
Harpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve been making many plans since the day i heard this news. Its been a long time s...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...en a long time since we last met. While i was making a plan to pick you up from t...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e urgent work at the office came up. If i had an option, i would have cancelled i...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the office came up. If i had an option, i would have cancelled it. But sadly, thi...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...have cancelled it. But sadly, this is a kind of a situation, which can not be avoided or ...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...can not be avoided or postponed. You dont have to be worried though. All you need...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nutes prior to your arrival time. Also, i left a duplicate key with my neighbour,...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...performance of a notorious street band, i hope. See you soon. Best regards ...
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Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... See you soon. Best regards Harpreet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06276150628 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1067683109 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589958158996 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8301134498 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6923076923 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299499148266 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108818086407 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816643873393 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143736171523 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117699127762 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.27 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.