Dear Coco,
Sorry to tell you that you cannot stay with me in July during your visit to China from Australia, because I recently decide to apply a working holiday visa to New Zealand. Please accept my sincerely apology.
Due to the reason that I urgently need to improve my spoken English, I will apply the next working holiday visa in June 23. I have to practice my oral English in a English-spoken country, like New Zealand. I guess I will be in New Zealand when you arrive in China.
However, you can live in my house if you travel in China as planed. I will leave my keys in my mailbox. You can still live in my home. Besides, I can inquest a friend of mine to keep you company. He can be helpful with your travel in China. Inconveniences caused are greatly regreted. Please tell me your latest plan, I can make a new arrangement for you.
Yours sincerely
Jim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: IN_JANUARY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on June'? This seems to be a day date.
Suggestion: on June
...ill apply the next working holiday visa in June 23. I have to practice my oral English ...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... I have to practice my oral English in a English-spoken country, like New Zealan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, still, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47776270702 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.622605031667 94% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8926001535 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.3846153846 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4615384615 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259754748765 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949126202425 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921020253613 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171872832882 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886912852933 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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