Dear Mr and Mrs. Smith,
My name is Jim and I will be living with you in the following four years. I am grateful that your family choose me in the English and Homestay program. I am looking forward to visit your home in New Zealand and learn English.
Before my arrival, I have sereral important questions that require answer with your help. First, I have never lived in a city in south hemisphere. I do not know what clother should I bring for the climate of New Zealand. Second, I have no idea about the medicare system of New Zealand and I cannot decide whether or not should I purchase a health insurence in China or there. I hope to hear your suggestion before my arrival.
I will arrive at the Aucland International Airport on 13 Febrary 2017. I hope your reply will reach me before this date. Other recommendations are welcome regarding the transportation and education. I am excited about my stay in New Zealand and thank you for you choosing me.
Yours sincerely,
JIm pan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
... Homestay program. I am looking forward to visit your home in New Zealand and learn Engl...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...stem of New Zealand and I cannot decide whether or not should I purchase a health insurence i...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I cannot decide whether or not should I purchase a health insurence in China or ...
^^
Line 8, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ternational Airport on 13 Febrary 2017. I hope your reply will reach me before th...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61235955056 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63562193169 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5274418854 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6428571429 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267212326553 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865841892442 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069716734417 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133657081846 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912762510696 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.