A friend is expecting you to stay with him in two weeks time, but unfortunately you forgot that you have a business trip at the same time.
Write letter to friend
-apologise and say that you cannot come to visit
-explain why you will not able to visit
-suggest another time that you could visit
Dear frind,
I am writing a letter to say extremly sorry because I will not be able to meet you in net two weeks. I am really keen on to visit you and spend lasure time with you but unfortunatly my schedual does not permit.
I would like to make claer that I have a business trip exactly at this time, also I did not bear in mind until I have recieved a reminder email from my boss. At firs I was schocked in order to promise you to cach up on old time, afterward I came to conclusion that write a letter and explain the problem. I hope my matter will be understandable enough, in addition you would not bother.
I suggest that set another time, if you have free time for next month. Meanwhile I will buy two cinema tickets for that time to compensate. I think you will be kind enough to agree new plan.
I am looking forward to answering my letter.
Best regard,
Bahare Past
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...natly my schedual does not permit. I would like to make claer that I have a ...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime, afterward I came to conclusion that write a letter and explain the problem. ...
^^
Line 11, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ggest that set another time, if you have free time for next month. Meanwhile I wi...
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Line 11, column 73, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... if you have free time for next month. Meanwhile I will buy two cinema tickets for that ...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...ng forward to answering my letter. Best regard, Bahare Past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31764705882 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36942023481 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5981970763 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41464253698 0.216113520407 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148674776592 0.0766984524023 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927722380524 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228643709957 0.12726935374 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123461562508 0.0580467560999 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.