Dear Andrew,
I am writing to thank you for accepting the work which i have assigned to see my home and dog .Its kind very kind of you but be careful with dog (Julie) she may over react with strangers just you keep the food on time for her so that she will not trouble you.
Let me explain in more detail,I am leaving on 3rd of next week and will be back on 6th Sunday morning. I guess to you my Anna nagar home at 2nd street last red color building. Don't worry about the food and other stuff .Our house keeping lady will come regularly and she do all the necessary work like will cooking and washing . I urge you to take care of Julie by taking her walking every morning and give food 4 times a day .
Could you let me know when can you come to my home so that i will plan accordingly and handover the duties to you.
Please let me know.
Yours friend,
Mike
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...h i have assigned to see my home and dog .Its kind very kind of you but be carefu...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
...i have assigned to see my home and dog .Its kind very kind of you but be careful w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and dog .Its kind very kind of you but be careful with dog Julie she may over r...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...le you. Let me explain in more detail,I am leaving on 3rd of next week and will...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
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...ont worry about the food and other stuff .Our house keeping lady will come regul...
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Suggestion: Our
...t worry about the food and other stuff .Our house keeping lady will come regularl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...stuff .Our house keeping lady will come regularly and she do all the necessary w...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ping lady will come regularly and she do all the necessary work like will cookin...
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Line 6, column 309, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cook'
Suggestion: cook
...she do all the necessary work like will cooking and washing . I urge you to take care o...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ssary work like will cooking and washing . I urge you to take care of Julie by tak...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...very morning and give food 4 times a day . Could you let me know when can you c...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ow when can you come to my home so that i will plan accordingly and handover the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, may, so, i guess, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11111111111 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.89007618495 2.54303337028 74% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5423698026 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194708814827 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921696201503 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091504164985 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112561145057 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015704241966 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 70.7449484536 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.