Dear John,
I hope you are doing good. I just received your letter and felt delighted after seeing the job offer to work with you in your esteemed company. At the same time, i am sorry to say that i cannot support you any time before the next three months because of the strict notice period i have to serve in the current company.
Recently, i came across an article about Xerox company where i found that you have been successful in expanding in five more countries in the last two years, thereby increasing your employees count as well. Xerox has always been my dream company, and you know how much i have troubled you to refer me there.
Though i am happy about the offer. I am feeling guilty that i will not be joining your company immediately. As i am sure of my will, i will refer my decision to resign from my actual position at Megatek. I will wait for the three months which are obligatory in my contract and i can't wait to join your company.
Once again thanks for offering me a job in your firm, can't wait to meet you soon.
All the best,
Dean
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...our esteemed company. At the same time, i am sorry to say that i cannot support y...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t the same time, i am sorry to say that i cannot support you any time before the ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve in the current company. Recently, i came across an article about Xerox comp...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ss an article about Xerox company where i found that you have been successful in ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...have troubled you to refer me there. Though i am happy about the offer. I am feelin...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oubled you to refer me there. Though i am happy about the offer. I am feeling ...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...out the offer. I am feeling guilty that i will not be joining your company immedi...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...be joining your company immediately. As i am sure of my will, i will refer my dec...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y immediately. As i am sure of my will, i will refer my decision to resign from m...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...which are obligatory in my contract and i cant wait to join your company. Once...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ich are obligatory in my contract and i cant wait to join your company. Once agai...
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Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nks for offering me a job in your firm, cant wait to meet you soon. All the best,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33830845771 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.198453365 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4016285609 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2727272727 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318591095389 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115972319923 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803931256471 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194775253727 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596335219019 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.