A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
-Give details of what you know about his company
-Explain your current situation
-Give your answer to the offer and explain why
Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing good. I just received your letter and felt delighted after seeing the job offer to work with you in your esteemed company. At the same time, I’m sorry to say that I cannot support you any time before the next three months because of the strict notice period I have to serve in the current company.
Recently, I came across an article about Infinite company where I found that you have been successful in expanding to five more countries in the last financial year thereby increasing your employees count as well. Infinite has always been my dream company and you know how much I have troubled you to refer me there.
Though I’m happy about the offer, I’m feeling guilty that I’ll not be joining your company immediately. Presently, I’m the Lead for my team and responsible for one revenue making project which my team is working on and it has the deadline in three months. So, I’m already working on weekends and sometimes work even after reaching home to complete this project. Because of this, I can’t even negotiate to my HR team for the reduction of the notice period.
Therefore, as a friend, I’m sure you will understand my situation and I promise you I’ll join your company after three months which is on January 2, 2020.
Once again, thanks a lot for offering me a job in your firm and I’m waiting to meet you soon.
Best Regards,
Ren
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| 2022-09-02 | m_sepahi@ymail.com | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-08 | Andi777 | 73 | view |
| 2023-01-05 | ielts_tony | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86746987952 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41515432964 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606425702811 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5671528196 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329398009055 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119635094089 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086061451196 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200515707739 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617358649655 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.