A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work .You have had a similar problem in the past .Write a reply to your friend :
1.In your letter tell your friend that you understand the problem .
2. Explain what happen to you in the past.
3.Suggest possible solution to the problem.
Dear Raghav
I hope my letter finds you in best of your health.Yesterday, i received your letter describing the problems you are facing at your workplace.
Well, i know that you did your academics in Electronics and are not much acquainted with computer programming languages.Nevertheless, your work demands exceptional technical skills.
As my academic background was also not computer science.I faced equivalent hardships at my work.Primarily, I found it really problematic.Besides stepping out of the difficulty, i decided to overcome it.
Finally i joined computer crash courses that includes every minute related to my profession.Apart from this, i started doing online practice of coding questions.Slowly and steadily , i saw tremendous change in my computer skills.So, i will also suggest you to do the same.
Hope my advice will definitely helps you to improve.
Regards
Gautami
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...me. Hope my advice will definitely helps you to improve. Regards Gautami
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, nevertheless, really, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80740740741 4.54256449028 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8309246921 2.54303337028 151% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696296296296 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4402970921 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.8 76.5299724578 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 4.34317383033 322% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246781259202 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121407104889 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122797553783 0.0603063233224 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149275529901 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127086117676 0.0580467560999 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 8.37731958763 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 70.7449484536 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 8.71597938144 192% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 7.59969072165 135% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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