Dear Grace,
I am glad to receive your letter. How are you and your kids? Further, it has been long time we both have met each other. It's 4-5 years that i saw you here. We meet most of the time in Social media only. I welcome your thoughts to invite me to come and stay with you for your holidays. Most Importantly, I saw your vacation photos and it was so awesome, astonishing places.
If you don't mind, I have prior commitments this time, so, I need to complete the construction work. However, as you know, here expenses are in peak and I'm there to manage them. Also, we have family marriage happening in month end. Besides, I am taking care of marriage from girl's side. As you know, there are lots of booking required for marriage hall, flower arrangements and transport and catering for 2-3 days. I am involved in those activities and have very less time for myself.
Shall we discuss and plan, so that I can visit Netherlands next April? I can plan for booking flights. Further, I have sufficient time for booking flights and hotels that are affordable to my family.
Let me know if you are with me. I am looking forward to enjoying the holidays with you.
Best wishes,
Trace
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...have met each other. Its 4-5 years that i saw you here. We meet most of the time ...
^
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... awesome, astonishing places. If you dont mind, I have prior commitments this tim...
^^^^
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...you know, here expenses are in peak and Im there to manage them. Also, we have fam...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52073732719 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40471762685 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6593845059 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.6315789474 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4210526316 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.94845360825 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262700283087 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830539635899 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947762974805 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155759842913 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924520588786 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.75 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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