A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, 1. Thank him/her for invitation, 2. Explain why you can not

Dear Kmar

I'm delighted to receive a letter from you , I'm so happy that you doing well with your new life in Dubai from your word i can imagine how grate place is dubai ,so sweet that you inviting me to stay with you

I'm really like to come on December but i regrade to say i wont come be case i have commitment to fly Singapore for some business in first of december after i promised my parents to visit home my mother 60th birth day coming on 26th of december so the eagerly waiting for my presents

how hewer i am free in January to February if you ok with it we can plan to spend time to gather I'm relly like to visit Dubai to got the desert and see wonderful light work in Burch kalifa let me know your thoughts , I'm looking forward spend time with you and excited to start booking my flight

thank you

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Kmar Im delighted to receive a letter from yo...
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Dear Kmar Im delighted to receive a letter from you ...
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...m delighted to receive a letter from you , Im so happy that you doing well with yo...
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Suggestion: I'm
...elighted to receive a letter from you , Im so happy that you doing well with your ...
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...h your new life in Dubai from your word i can imagine how grate place is dubai ,...
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...i from your word i can imagine how grate place is dubai ,so sweet that you inviti...
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... i can imagine how grate place is dubai ,so sweet that you inviting me to stay wi...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...et that you inviting me to stay with you Im really like to come on December but i...
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...at you inviting me to stay with you Im really like to come on December but i r...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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... Im really like to come on December but i regrade to say i wont come be case i ha...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...egrade to say i wont come be case i have commitment to fly Singapore for some bu...
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...y i wont come be case i have commitment to fly Singapore for some business in fi...
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...ome business in first of december after i promised my parents to visit home my mo...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...0th birth day coming on 26th of december so the eagerly waiting for my presents ...
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... so the eagerly waiting for my presents how hewer i am free in January to Februa...
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...y waiting for my presents how hewer i am free in January to February if you o...
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... it we can plan to spend time to gather Im relly like to visit Dubai to got the de...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...see wonderful light work in Burch kalifa let me know your thoughts , Im looking f...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Burch kalifa let me know your thoughts , Im looking forward spend time with you ...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: I'm
...rch kalifa let me know your thoughts , Im looking forward spend time with you and...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...u and excited to start booking my flight thank you
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...to start booking my flight thank you
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.125 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03939257747 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 160.0 16.3608247423 978% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 660.0 76.5299724578 862% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 160.0 16.8248392259 951% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 4.34317383033 875% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263073180284 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263073180284 0.0766984524023 343% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161383600225 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104126172102 0.0580467560999 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 78.0 8.37731958763 931% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -65.54 70.7449484536 -93% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 62.2 7.45979381443 834% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.86 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.45 7.59969072165 177% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 8.62886597938 591% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 66.0 8.54432989691 772% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 51.0 8.15463917526 625% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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