A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit.
You need to write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter with
Dear...
Dear Param,
Hope all is well with you!
I am writing to thank you for your invitation. Though I am dying to come and meet you, but unfortunately it won’t be possible as there are some tasks that I have to complete within that period.
Let me explain in a little more detail. As I told you last time, I’ve recently moved to a new role within my company and the work load in this function is quite high. This is majorly because we have to interact with the sales team on a daily basis and anything which impacts their numbers has to be attended to immediately. Moreover, we are facing staff crunch as a couple of my peers had resigned and left last week. Therefore, during the couple of days we have off in the next week, I am planning to complete the pending activities which are extremely important and urgent.
Alternatively, could you let me know if you are free in the Christmas holidays next month? An employee is going to join our team before that, and I am really hopeful that things will be under control by then! I’d also like to see your son, I suppose he would be 3 years old by now?
Please let me know!
Your friend,
Atul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'offed'.
Suggestion: offed
...fore, during the couple of days we have off in the next week, I'm planning to ...
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Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Please let me know! Your friend, Atul
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, as to, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34761904762 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25897554691 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661904761905 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.4319914361 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219719642834 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892498076224 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119659296937 0.0603063233224 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163833811988 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119465087744 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.