A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Give him/her your other news.
Dear Anna,
How’re you? Sorry it’s been so long since I last wrote. I’m so glad that you send me an invitation to spend my winter vacation with you.
Thanks so much for your letter. When I was receiving your letter, I was feeling beyond the clouds. With the snap of finger, I eagerly open it and continue to read while I was eating my lunch. I’m so happy that you invited me to come and stay with you in your home town Toronto.
You know very well, I always dreamed about this moment to go at Toronto and spend my winter holidays watching snow. Unfortunately, I can’t accept this because already joined .net classes for this winter to improve my programming skills.
Besides this, I cleared my IELTS exam and I got my Permanent Residency Card this week. I want to migrate in your country Canada to pursue my career as a software engineer. So these classes are really important for me. I hope we can spend our next Christmas holidays together. How does that sound? See you soon!
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pos;t accept this because already joined .net classes for this winter to improve m...
^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. How does that sound? See you soon! Best regards, Aman
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, really, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74316939891 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42823478398 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0007885204 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8666666667 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238662318207 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846179006625 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862901245561 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147447246875 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882469823619 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.