Dear Alex,
I hope you and your family are well. First of all, thank you so much for the invitation to Anne's 8th birthday party. I am so thrilled to know that she is already turning 8 and growing up so fast. I wish her happy birthday and best in her life.
However, I am afraid and terribly sorry that I will not be able to attend her special day. As you know, I am attending a conference in Singapore that week, I have registered for this event almost a month ago, and luckily I was selected. This conference is on Data Analytics that is a crucial topic nowadays. I am anticipating to gain more knowledge and enhance my skills so I can apply for the Data Analyst job position in my company which is highly paid and have aspects of growth. Unfortunately, I will not be able to postpone it.
Although, I am planning to be in your town next month and I am hoping that I can meet you and your family during my trip to New Delhi. I am planning to visit historical buildings mainly such as Red Fort and India Gate. Please let me know when you have some time off also convey my apologies to Anne and let her know that I owe her a birthday present.
Yours faithfully
Dave
- some people think that Genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 61
- Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? Give reasons for your opinion. 73
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 11
- Many people say that we now live in ‘consumer societies’ where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that consumer culture has played a vital role in improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (-Syerap 89
- The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, such as, you know, first of all, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44970746553 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0929915086 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3846153846 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183840448462 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651015361323 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639249133922 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129805416453 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545319186374 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.