A friend you made while you studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves, say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her, explain how to apply for the job
Dear Selena!
I’m satisfying to inform you about one interesting position for you, about which my college Helen has told me recently.
As you have interest in finding job in Russia, I can advise you the one. This vacation related to the construction area, especially in project administrating. This kind of work requires management skills and includes managing bosses’ schedule, orginising meetings with different colleges or companies’ leaders.
In my opinion you obviously have appropriate knowledge about this as you studied this field. Also, I think you have excellent communication skills, I find you very responsible person and you can easily get this position.
Selena, you just need to find this my company’s website and apply wit your update CV. Moreover, I’ll tell you the phone number which allows you to contact in direct your potential boss.
I really hope you find in interesting for you, and can get this position very soon. Take care and let me know that everything is clear.
Best wishes,
Olga
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, as to, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34939759036 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94429829284 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.054549798 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370296266596 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149928041616 0.0766984524023 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107083288025 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222886055339 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541344734713 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.