A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In this letter
tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
say why you think this job would be suitable for him/her
explain how to apply for the job
Dear Sam,
I am writing with regards to your letter where you had expressed interest in working in my country.
I recently came across a posting in the newspaper for a local company who is looking for a Senior Mechanical Engineer with proficiency in design of generators. The role involves product design, testing, manufacturing support and client interactions.
Since I know your degree is in the same field and besides you have over three years of experience in designing generators, I think this will be a great fit for you. Moreover, this is one of the best companies in our area in terms of salary and employee benefits, which I know are important criteria for you.
The posting mentioned to email them an updated resume and cover letter at the following address, www.gensets123.com . I would suggest you mention that you are willing to relocate in your letter, so that it will increase your chances of securing an interview.
Let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
John Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he following address, www.gensets123.com . I would suggest you mention that you ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02923976608 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92619230506 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695906432749 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4967099611 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345788433987 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124587530393 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822165235688 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165156260824 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07409656548 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.