A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
• say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
• explain how to apply for the job
Dear Jamie,
Hope you are good and I trust this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. Your letter recalled our great memories from the University of Sydney. Also, after considering your plight, I have started the job hunt with respect to your profile in several job portals and got some prospective opportunities.
Buddy, let me brief you on the specifics of the employment. First of all, the topic of your dissertation will indeed prove a supporting point to get this job about the traditions and historical culture of India. As this job is from a renowned travel agency Dove Travels Pvt. Ltd., aiming to get business along with spreading knowledge about the cultural aspects of India to foreign tourists. Furthermore, despite their expansion plans in Sydney, they are looking for international consultants to expand their business, provided that the applicant agrees to initiate from India and get some experience.
Pal, personally I believe this would be an appropriate job for you, not only due to your ample knowledge but also being an avid explorer, I am sure you will love your job. Above all, with an MBA degree in international marketing and having industrial training in the department of travel and tourism you can effortlessly avail this opportunity.
My dear friend, although this is an emerging company in the travel industry, they follow a corporate structure to apply for their vacancy. Please visit their corporate website www.dovetravels.com, create your profile and submit it. After receiving their reply, you can further discuss your candidacy for the post in a formal interview. Please contact me anytime for any other information you might require.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
With lots of love,
Jenny Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...itions and historical culture of India. As this job is from a renowned travel agen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 937.175257732 160% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16896551724 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84391625946 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 127.690721649 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8007366457 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392361598535 0.216113520407 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115668380399 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788684385628 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216728600352 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825457612863 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 41.2886597938 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.