Dear Rekha,
How are you doing, thanks for remembering me. Well, I have received your letter two days ago, it is a great idea to come to Canada.
I am glad to tell you about an opportunity in my current organization. We have an open position in BT account and the designation is software Engineer. The roles and responsibilities would be coding, interacting with clients, getting the requirement and implementing them.
As soon as I see that in my company job posting website, I think you are suitable for this. Because I have seen your coding skills when we were in college also the passion for the software development you had.
To apply for the above position, if you look at our company portal which is www.jobbank.com/apply. here you have search for a job code 1888 and the title you can find a software developer, click on the link and provide the necessary information and apply for it. Regarding this, if you have any questions you can reach out to me.
I will be waiting eagerly to see you here at earliest and All the very best for the interview.
Yours lovingly,
Bhanu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...have received your letter two days ago, its a great idea to come to Canada. I am...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
... portal which is www.jobbank.com/apply. here you have search for a job code 1888 and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96038661139 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7474278855 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412079232445 0.216113520407 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143792122178 0.0766984524023 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077468826184 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207260637273 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965071976275 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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