A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.
Dear x,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and happiness. I am writing this letter to recommend a great place for your holiday as you wished in a phone call. The Great Smoky Mountains are an adventurous place for a young couple like you to visit. It still gives me an indelible experience since our visit.
The Smokies are the mountain range along the North Carolina and the Tennessee border. Pigeon forge, the mountain town in the Eastern Tennessee provides abode for the intrepid travelers like us. The spacious, log cabins are located within 15 minutes of pigeon forge attractions are equipped with amenities like indoor jetted tubs, cozy fireplaces and game tables. These cabins provide you the best scenic view of the mountains in the fall season.
The scenic view of the helicopter tour is fascinating. It covers 30 miles of smoky mountains and the outskirts of Pigeon forge along the Tennessee valley for 15 minutes.
The other attractions are the longest downhill Alpine coaster, Llama treks, White water rafting for beginners and non-swimmers as well. Moreover, you can buy all these attractions as a package while booking the cabin rentals. I would also recommend you to try authentic food and the luscious and fragrant wine from the dwellers.
Anyway, I hope all these information will help you to decide your holiday destination. I wish you to enjoy your vacations with your wife as well. Happy Holidays!!
Yours truly,
y
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'fall'.
Suggestion: fall
...he best scenic view of the mountains in the fall season. The scenic view of the helicopter t...
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Line 11, column 20, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...rom the dwellers. Anyway, I hope all these information will help you to decide your holiday de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00819672131 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56172129967 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7327093667 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.375 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333946318074 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112229702916 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104492434047 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177387141009 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134020281384 0.0580467560999 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.