Dear Kelly,
I hope you are doing well. I’m just writing to tell you about a camping holiday that you’re planning for this summer.
A camping holiday is a great idea. You would enjoy it a lot during your stay at the campsite because you could explore the forest and the sunset. Although, there are many activities that you can do like rope climbing, river rafting, and a campfire. Many people are coming to the campsite from different parts of the country, so you will get a chance to learn about our rich culture.
Having said that, However, there are some disadvantages of such a camping holiday as well, such as sharing bathrooms with other people, bad weather, and dealing with mosquitoes, bugs, and dangerous animals.
Anyway, I would love to go camping with you this summer, but I have to work on my assignment because it has a deadline to finish it. I will have to give up on that idea.
Take care and stay fine.
keep in touch.
Mayank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keep
...at idea. Take care and stay fine. keep in touch. Mayank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, may, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65497076023 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34302316084 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66081871345 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0817885013 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3636363636 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195442784363 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636826566015 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692774327033 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909779992634 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623303877878 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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