A friend of yours is visiting your region and has asked you to help to arrange accommodation. Write to him / her. In your letter
-Give details of the accommodation.
-What you think he should bring with him.
-Sightseeing places he could visit.
Dear Rohan,
I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and the best of spirits. It is a pleasant information that you are coming to spent your few holiday at my town Bharuch. I am writing this letter to inform you that do not bother about anything during your trip including accommodation.
There are plethora of lodges and luxurious hotels available near to my location. However, i would like you to stay with me at my home, if you do not have any concern. I have informed to my parents about your journey and they really excited to meet you after such a long period. Moreover, you do not have to carry more luggage except your clothes, other all arrangements will be done as per requirements.
Furthermore, there are many places that you should never forget to visit. I also will take leave from job and will join you in visiting tourist places that will be easy for you i think, in that way will get time to spent quality time. " Statue of Unity " worlds tallest statue that you must visit. Apart from this we will also visit Saputara hill station that you would definitely like due to the amazing atmosphere. Other things will discuss when you will come.
I hope to see you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Bharat Prajapati.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun holiday seems to be countable; consider using: 'few holidays'.
Suggestion: few holidays
...ation that you are coming to spent your few holiday at my town Bharuch. I am writing this l...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...available near to my location. However, i would like you to stay with me at my ho...
^
Line 13, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ourist places that will be easy for you i think, in that way will get time to spe...
^
Line 13, column 266, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the tallest'.
Suggestion: worlds the tallest
...ity time. ' Statue of Unity ' worlds tallest statue that you must visit. Apart from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67264573991 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38982742287 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.838427102 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4285714286 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277701936417 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102203985094 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507552066693 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153055037898 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496181896421 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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