The line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide was released by people in 5 countries: England, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1067 to 2007.
In general, the average carbon dioxide releasing in Portugal and Italy had a trend to go up during this period of time while this figure for the UK and Sweden seemed to decline.
The graph indicated that, Portugal showed a gradual increase in carbon dioxide emissions from abot 1,2 metric tones to approximately 4,6 metric tonnes in 2007. Likewise, Italy saw the same trend till reached a peak at 7,8 metric tones in 1997 then levelled off till 2007.
In regards, the figure for the UK stabilized at about 10,8 metric tones from 1967 to 1977 and then it experienced a sharp decline to 8,6 metric tones in 2007. While that, the amount of carbon dioxide emissions in Sweden started from 8,6 metric tones in 1967 before reaching a high at 10,4 metric tones. Following that, Sweden then saw a considerable fall to only 8,8 metric tones in 2007.
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- the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 78
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 93
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... Italy had a trend to go up during this period of time while this figure for the UK and Sweden...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, then, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74137931034 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38724453111 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.2999965174 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194943960346 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109140559972 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057487013093 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140860468171 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355288283546 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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