The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the estimated highest population of elephants in nine different Asian countries in both 1997 and 2004. Overall, the number of elephants in Asian countries witnessed a remarkable fall between 1997 and 2004, apart from the elephant population in Cambodia and Laos. Additionally, the largest population of elephants was in India.
In 1997, India was occupied by the largest number of elephants, at 10000, nearly double the elephant population in Myanmar, at 5400. Thailand reported the second highest population of elephants, at 3900. Similarly, Sri Lanka and Malaysia were home to the same number of elephants, at 3000. By contrast, Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos and China registered roughly 1000 elephants.
In 2004, Thailand and Malaysia experienced a plunge in elephant population, shrinking to 1300 and 1000. There was a significant fall to 7500 and 500 in elephant population in India and China, whereas the number of elephants in Vietnam, Sri Lanka and Myanmar dropped minimally to 1100, 2800 and 4800, respectively. By contrast, Cambodia saw a marginal growth in elephant population to 1500, while the population of elephants in Laos remained stable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'estimated the highest'.
Suggestion: estimated the highest
The graph illustrates the estimated highest population of elephants in nine differe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, similarly, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 32.9175257732 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41530054645 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94175900982 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 1.44329896907 624% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9208574006 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177440661946 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811814078388 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641791957033 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134918052522 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686613377358 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.