The given line chart illustrates the data regarding amount of bananas in four various nations Japan, France,Germany and USA between 1996 and 2004.
Overall, it can be seen that the rate of bananas increased in Germany and USA whereas France and Japan was showing a downfall in the price of bananas.
It is crystal clear that, in 1996,the amount of bananas in USA started at 1 US per kilogram which was remained constant in the year of 1997.After that it was upsurged and reached near about 1.3 US per kilogram in 1998 but it remained similar at 1.3 US per kilogram from 1998 to 2004 in USA. however, in Germany, the rate of bananas was 1.5 US per kilogram in 1996 which was decreased in 1997.Between 1997 and 2004 it showed some fluctuations and accounted around 1.7 Us per kilogram.
Moving further, Japan was the merely country who had maximum price of bananas in 1996. The rate of bananas went up in 1998 while there had be seen dramatic decline manifested in the amount of bananas in Japan, it comprised to 2.5 US per kilogram in 2004.On the contrary, in first 3 years the price of bananas in France remained same at 2 US per kilogram. A slight decrease was observed in the rate of bananas from 1998 to 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51450338491 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486363636364 0.622605031667 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5481417296 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.857142857 76.5299724578 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4285714286 16.8248392259 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151729894097 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989581905078 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283366505994 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105987121297 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363446667761 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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