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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: maryam2
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat contribute to human’s satisfaction. There is an explanation why it is recent...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'defining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: defining
...y assumed that happiness is challenging to define. The answer depends on the passions and...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to gather'.
Suggestion: to gather
...ness for some people, others may choose gathering with family as the most wonderful thing...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 187, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ant key factors bringing happiness to a humans life. It is necessary for people to fin...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 937.175257732 185% => OK
No of words: 329.0 206.0 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28267477204 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95143195145 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 290.88556701 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2894136404 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202970435374 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746609021819 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711341249783 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13643472793 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570755306367 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 41.2886597938 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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